Completing my post now; I think everything lines up with yours, skipper, I'm not really bothered with inconsistencies (on my end) in this little arc since I don't think there's much I'll carry on, so don't worry about me feeling slighted. I ended up with three bodies and only two were reported but mistakes like that happen in real life so I don't think you should even change it. You can butcher my part to fit in details if you've got a particular direction in mind.
Hadn't really thought where I was going to take this, I am pretty much OK with anyone dying or getting arrested or whatever except the jew and Harold.
not really feeling the creative passion these last few weeks
I need to work myself back into the groove of writing
Don't even bother critiquing this one, anyone, because I know god damn it it's eating me up inside im just going to kill myself i cant live with the shame but i cant be bothered doing anything about it
Hadn't really thought where I was going to take this, I am pretty much OK with anyone dying or getting arrested or whatever except the jew and Harold.
- for skipper:
- I figure the dead guys could lead back to Pussy who i am planning on killing soon, i think
i can't remember
I'll let you know soon whenever I think about it
did i tell you what I had planned? I legitimately can't remember
not really feeling the creative passion these last few weeks
I need to work myself back into the groove of writing
Don't even bother critiquing this one, anyone, because I know god damn it it's eating me up inside im just going to kill myself i cant live with the shame but i cant be bothered doing anything about it